Lulu Dot Com Slash Versely
Shared in dilutionversely I slash despair,cut in todance with hopemix the bittersin sweet liqueursSplash me wellto sip ambrosiawhen the party is over;be careful beforeAt the party of the orchardall...
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Hey Doug. I'm not sure what you are attempting here. The only strophe that speaks to me is S4. Shared in dilutionversely I slash despair,Not familiar with the term "versely"cut in todance with hopeI...
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Versely is an adverb-- it means poeticallySlashing prices means reducing prices. Cuttting into more manageable pieces. When despair is reduced, dancing with hope can begin.The "party" is the communist...
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Thanks for those clarifications Doug, what a great subject for a poem! It might be just me but I suspect this is a little too abstract for the average, or even the slightly above average reader . I...
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